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I might wright on my Day to day life here in kenai and growing up. Or my Past here in kenai and how trapped I was In myself. Or my school life here at kchs.

The theme in The house on mango street and Son is growing up. Anexample is ” All night the boy who is a man watches me dance”. She issappy and excited that a man shows interest in her. Becausefinding a life longpartner is part of growing up. Also an example is ” without opening them, he knocks them to the floor, puts his head on the table, and falls asleep”. People when growing up must take resibility and work hard.Being able to support yourself ispart of growing up. There are up sand Dow s in growing up.

Is it in the right form? Is it smooth? Do i need to change anything? If so what do I need to change? What can i improve? Does the theme match the story? Is my story ok? Is my story good? Is it easy to follow?

I think cody will get 4,5,and 6. He is proicient and he will pass.

I look at the format is good, double space, and spelling and they are all good!

The Cask of Amontillado is not really suspenseful. “The cough is a mere nothing; it will not kill me. I shall not die of a cough.”  Some suspense can be seen, but not much. and It can be seen from the beginning of the story that he wants this mans life. Its just that this story is too predictable, thus un-suspenseful.

 The Most dangerous game has lots of the suspense. For example “The general’s eyes had left the ground and were traveling inch by inch up the tree.’ When reading the story there is an aura of dread in each word. The dread is coming from the fact that men who are forced to be a beast are scary to the sight. As a result it makes you want o know what happens next.

Rasford does enjoy the most dangerous game. “You have won the game” Rainsnsford did not smile. “I am still a beast,” he said in a low, hoarse voice.Men who have an insatiable thirst for the thrill of the hunt get entraped In an illusion of ecstasy. So when faced with an opponent of equal skill, plagues the opponent with the same thirst. Rainsford, the hunted becomes the hunter, thus gaining the thirst.

1.The characters are Gail, couple of black girls, Elena, her father and mother, President Kennedy, Eugene, father and mother, Jewsih couple, and Mr. DePalma. Gail is a black girl that is fast at jump rope. The couple of black girls called Elena names. Elena is has a huge crush on Eugene. Her father works at a blue jeans factory in Passaic. Her mother was an unhappy person in Paternson. President Kennedy died. Eugene is Elenas crush. His mother is a nurse. His father works nights. Jewish couple own the house before them. Mr. DePalma is the P.E. teacher.

2.On this day in the story President Kennedy was assassinated. It is important because that is the day all of the immigrants hopes died. 

3.”You are heading for humiliation and pain”

1. The Pressident and been assassinated so not is the best time to study.

2. Because the only way to learn is to do it first hand.

3.  No, she is not a bad mother. She does care but at the moment she doesnt care.

4.  I think she does not want to let her in because she is crying for the president.

The climax of this story is the moment he is faced with a choice, the girl or the fish.  He has a fish on the line, a big fish, and smokin hot chick in the boat. Now he has to decide wether he wants a huge fish (that might break records) or try his luck to get the girl.

While i was reading this book there was a big question i had, “Why dude she is out of your league, if you catch the fish you have it for life, so why did you cut the line?”

The major conflict was the character vs. self. Why i think this is because he loves the girl and loves the size of this fish.

He views her as the center of his world, he loves her with almost all his heart. I do not agree with this. I think this because he is young and does not know anything about girls yet.

I think the Narrator learned that girls are not always worth the sacrifice. Some girls are worth sacrificeing  a little of your life and soul for, some (like sheila mant) are not worth it.